Something I've been working on and would love feedback on Sept 13, 2015 15:42:08 GMT Select PostDeselect PostLink to PostMemberGive GiftBack to Top Post by imposter101 on Sept 13, 2015 15:42:08 GMT I've been working on a story for some time now and I'm trying to get a wider area of feedback. I know here the quality of writing is pretty high and I thought that it might be worth a shot trying to get some feedback. It's a pretty extensive WIP. docs.google.com/document/d/11M2KvCu_6YpBKZ4VGKAi9tNc8h5f5NLoVFTfZV2wNys/edit?usp=sharingdocs.google.com/document/d/1hiioA7y7Ws1IqrRCvTpPu3v6Ag88ZlkGYa5vuK0AwNA/edit?usp=sharing